Often obscured by human stigma
Two spirits growing not as one
Else in the end neither have won
Fate plays the leading role
Binding two by the soul
Free Will takes the reigns
Together as two we break the chains
True Love flows from the source
Perpetual force propels the course
Carves through rock in constant motion
Powering its way to the expansive ocean
Sunlight sparkles on the great expanse
Dew crawls up the beaming lance
Love transforms to a billowing height
Zeus hurls bolts with all his might
Thunder pounds ethereal life
Slicing false love in two with a knife
True love absorbs the rumble
Enjoys the power in their passionate tumble
This is really beautiful TC, I’ve just shared it via Twitter 😊
did u get any hits:) Thanks AP…tough subject and could certainly be expanded upon 😉
I think you got it spot on TC, don’t know how you would check the hits, I just tweeted it from here, bit of a newbie when it comes to Twitter…I do know it was published in the “All about Abby Daily” it’s a paperli…because it bizarrely showed up as a mention for me, but when I checked it was definitely your poem with a direct link to your website 😊
Stunning photo you have chosen, and an equally stunning write.
Glad you liked both…some day I hope to post photos that are my own…plenty of great subjects here in the Northwest.
I especially applaud its genderlessness. Completely overwhelming the strictures of rhyme is always a bitch; you are forgiven, as the outcome is worth it. 🙂
LOL…rhyme and number of words and rhythm…poetry to full of rules…I often use rhyme for fun for it restricts word choice…I prefer the poems that have no rhyme but contain clarity and content. Perhaps I enjoy maxims and aphorisms or quotes most of all. Little clear concise nuggets 😉
Thanks for revealing this. Is it conscious, or the result of examining it for this comment?